A fairytale i wrote

Once upon a time lived a man who was born as an orphan he never found out who his parent was or what was his name. He only know that his name is David name given by the sisters at the foster house. He is now 18 and living on his own, he never did well in school so he has no money. He had a girlfriend but left him cause he can’t even support himself. He was depressed and sad, he even thought about suicide but he was to cowardly to do so. So all he can do was to lock himself inside a house sobbing and doing nothing else.

One day he was walking in a park because he was kick out of his house due to
lack of rent. He walked and sobbed wonder what can he do in his life. He was walking
when he notice there a church. He went into the church and talk to the priest, He said father what can I do in my life my girlfriend left me, I got no money and got kick out of my house. I thought about suicide but was too cowardly to do so I am a failure in life. The priest then said my son there no need to be afraid. God is with you as long as you do good and don’t do any sins God will be on your side.

He walked out of the Church with a new mind if I do good God will be on my side
so he set of to do good deeds. He walk around looking for good deeds to do when he
notice that a little kid was being pick on so he went over and defend the kid. The kid thank him and walked away. He continued walking when he notice a old lady is trying to get a crossed the street so he went over to help her.

A year has pass after the visit to the church, all David has done was good deeds
but he notice that his life is not getting any better. He still poor even though he found a job. He still has no girlfriend because his ex girlfriend still dislike him cause he is poor, and he still has not seen any sign of god helping him. He thought about it for a while and asked himself is it something I done wrong, Is it that I haven’t done good enough. He continue thinking and came up with a solution. The priest lied to me god is not on myside. So he went back to sobbing in his house and stop going to his job.

One day while he was sobbing in his house he notice there was this mysteries smell. He has never smelled it before and it came from his kitchen which is supposed to
be empty. He walked toward it and once he was about to get there he notice a gush
of wind. He rushed into his kitchen noticing it was full of food and notice that his
furniture is brand new. He walked out and notice that his house is completely brand new all his stuff is not the same stuff he had before. Then he notice that in his room is a stack and money and gold. Then he heard you have done well my son I am sorry for getting to you so late continue to do good deeds. You are no longer a failure you are now a winner and will live your life good as long as you do good. He lived happily ever after and continued doing good deeds.

The End

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Day 1

This is the first time i write on this blog. Hi today is August 19 2008 sunny. Today was a average day i woke up in about 10 o clock ate nothing for breakfast. i am tring to lose weight so i didn't eat breakfast. Then i watch TV for about 2 hours then i go outside to play basketball. So this is a typical day of my life. I pretty much did that today and i will repost tommorow hope i have something new talk about. Bbi =P